From Conspiracy Theory to Thriller

I have enjoyed writing Chillers and Thrillers, but I am turning my attention to other matters and must discontinue updating this blog, for the foreseeable future, at least. Thank you to all my readers and “followers.” I hope that you have enjoyed reading the potpourri of articles that have appeared here and, if you have not read all that is available, I hope that you will find some more articles of interest to you in Chillers and Thrillers archives. As a parting contribution, I offer you From Conspiracy Theory to Thriller.

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From Conspiracy Theory To Thriller

Copyright 2011 by Gary L. Pullman

This handout will help you to create your own conspiracy theory as a basis for writing a synopsis for a thriller that you can then develop into a full-fledged novel using the plotting templates included for this purpose.

First, the handout identifies the specific objectives for this course.

Next, it identifies the reason that many people are interested in conspiracy theories in general.

Then, the handout identifies the specific elements that are typical of conspiracy theories and analyzes two actual conspiracy theories in relation to these elements, listing the types of characters that typically appear in thrillers involving conspiracy theories.

(This handout also contains four appendices: One provides a list of other actual conspiracy theories; the second lists single-sentence ideas that could become “starters” for developing a full-fledged conspiracy theory as the basis of a thriller; the third identifies authors of thrillers and various thriller novels as references, should you want to research and analyze them on your own, as further practice in preparation for developing your own conspiracy theory; and the fourth summarizes some pseudo-scientific, allegedly non-fiction books concerning supposed conspiracies--all of which were bestsellers!)

You will be invited to develop your own, original conspiracy theory as a basis for a thriller, using the same strategies that actual conspiracy theorists often employ. You will then have the opportunity of obtaining classroom responses and suggestions concerning your theory. In addition, to evaluate your conspiracy theory, for revision purposes, the handout identifies the type of evidence that conspiracy theorists typically provide to support their claims; you can use similar evidence to support your theory’s assertions.

Finally, the handout summarizes dramatic structure, as analyzed by Gustav Freytag, and provides a fill-in-the blanks plotting template, complete with an example that shows its application, which you can use to plot your own thriller, based upon the original conspiracy theory that you have developed.

During the workshop, the instructor will further explain and demonstrate the concepts and techniques introduced in this handout.

Objectives

From Conspiracy Theory To Thriller uses the following three steps to help you develop an original, full-fledged conspiracy theory of your own that you can then use to generate a synopsis for a full-length thriller:

Using the elements of actual conspiracy theories, develop a specific conspiracy of your own. (These elements will first be identified and clarified, as various actual conspiracy theories are examined.)

Develop a synopsis of your novel’s plot, based upon your conspiracy, using one of the plot-development tools presented in the course. (Handouts will be provided and explained in class.)

Create a platform for further novels (sequels) based upon the same conspiracy.

First, the Why

Why do some people believe in conspiracy theories? Michael Shermer, author of “Why people Believe in Conspiracies,” an online Scientific American article, has a few ideas concerning this topic:


Why do people believe in highly improbable conspiracies? In previous columns I have provided partial answers, citing patternicity (the tendency to find meaningful patterns in random noise) and agenticity (the bent to believe the world is controlled by invisible intentional agents). Cnspiracy theories connect the dots of random events into meaningful patterns and then infuse those patterns with intentional agency. Add to those propensities the confirmation bias (which seeks and finds confirmatory evidence for what we already believe) and the hindsight bias (which tailors after-the-fact explanations to what we
already know happened), and we have the foundation for conspiratorial cognition

(http://www.scientificamerican.com/article.cfm?id=why-people-believe-in-conspiracies).
 
Conspiracy Theory Elements

A conspiracy typically possesses these elements:

A well-funded, clandestine group or organization with a nefarious agenda, which they seek to keep secret (the agenda includes the motive or purpose of the conspiracy). The agenda could be to cover up the cause or purpose of an event (the AIDS virus as a means of exterminating African-Americans); to suppress the truth about the nature of an action or an event (the moon landing); to initiate an event or a series of events (usher in the Fourth Reich); to end a regime, organization, order, or organization (to destroy democracy from within the American political system); to introduce social or political changes (institutionalize special rights for a small segment of the general population); or to deny that an historical event or series of events occurred (the Holocaust or the moon landing).

The use of esoteric knowledge (alchemy, art, secret codes); sophisticated deception (doctored technology, historical revisionism, systematic propaganda, misdirection and redirection); or scientific, medical or technological means (viruses, parasites, chemical poisoning or contamination); or intimidation and force (martial law, incarceration, or public beatings, maiming, and executions) to implement and execute the conspiracy.

A scheme that involves the initiation of a specific event or set of events that has a particular, focused objective (the assassination of President John F. Kennedy); an ongoing series of conspiratorial activities with broad goals and a social, a national, or a global end (genocide against an ethnic group or the takeover of a country through the infiltration of its government or educational system); a hierarchical confederation of several conspiracy groups with at least a few overlapping or common goals (international capitalists’ control of government, economic, educational, and religious organizations); or an historical process among one or more conspirators or conspiracy organizations dedicated to securing their goals over a period of generations, centuries, or even millennia, either through sustained or recurring organizations (the Masons or the rise of subsequent “reichs”).

One person or a group of people dedicated to discovering or exposing the conspiracy. The group may be dedicated amateurs or experts, and they may be organized loosely and informally or closely and professionally. They follow events, pursue suspected conspirators, share information with themselves and the public, store and safeguard data pertaining to their investigations, and protect and defend themselves and one another when possible. The “truthers,” as such groups are sometimes called, may actually communicate the truth about a real conspiracy; may only believe that they are doing so; or may distort the truth to support and advance a hidden agenda of their own.

A sense of “us” (the good, law-abiding, patriotic, and ordinary citizenry) versus “them” (the corrupt, criminal, treasonous, and elitist conspirators).

In Voodoo Histories: The Role of the Conspiracy Theory in Shaping Modern History, David Aaronovitch cites seven elements that he finds to be typical of conspiracy theories, some of which have already been identified: (1) “historical precedent” (previous accounts of other conspiracy theories tend to make current conspiracy theories seem more plausible for those who are inclined to believe such theories in the first place); (2) “skeptics and sheeple” (the same as a sense of “us” versus “them,” identified in the last bullet, above); (3) “just asking questions” (conspiracy theorists pretend that they themselves do not necessarily subscribe to the conspiracy theory but are only making enquiries about bizarre incidents that may or may nor be related to one another, although “the questions asked. . . only make sense if the questioner really believes that there is indeed a secret conspiracy”); (4) “expert witnesses” (conspiracy theorists use statements by celebrity or expert witnesses to “validate their theories,” but the theorists are sometimes “opaque about the qualifications of their experts”); (5) “academic credibility” (conspiracy theorists “work hard to give their written evidence the veneer of scholarship” by supplying an abundance of footnotes and often extraneous, but voluminous information and a plethora of “quotations from non-conspiracist sources”); (6) “convenient inconvenient truths” (the fitting of new facts and arguments, including counterarguments and contradictory data into the conspiracy; explaining away contradictory facts and statements by labeling them as examples of “deliberate disinformation originating with the imagined plotters” or otherwise making excuses that twist or deny the contrary evidence so as to make it fit the conspiracy theory; and (7) “under surveillance” (implying that those who seek to expose the conspiracy theory are in danger from government agents, anonymous persons, or other public personnel or private individuals).

Conspiracy Elements Exemplified: Two Actual Conspiracy

The Pearl Harbor Conspiracy Theory

The claim that the president and military commanders purposely allowed the Japanese to attack Pearl Harbor is a conspiracy theory, not an actual historical event. The theory goes like this:

Although he received a message from the U. S. Navy on December 6, 1941, that the Japanese government had sent to its embassy in Washington, D. C., announcing that Japan had terminated diplomatic relations with the United States, President Franklin Delano Roosevelt took no action. The U. S. Army commander was General George C. Marshall, and the U. S. Navy commander was Admiral Harold R. Stark. The U. S. government suspected that, should the U. S. come under enemy attack, the strike would be directed against Pearl Harbor. Nevertheless, neither Roosevelt, Marshall nor Stark notified Admiral Husband E. Kimmel, the commander of the Pacific Fleet, which was stationed at Pearl Harbor, Hawaii, or the unit’s commanding general, Walter Short, of the imminent attack.

Marshall and Stark later testified that they had not notified Kimmel or Short because they did not want to confuse them with any more intercepted messages from the Japanese. When the Japanese attacked Pearl Harbor on December 7, 1941, both the base and the fleet were unprepared to defend themselves and 4,575 servicemen were killed in the “surprise” attack. Although both Marshall and Stark were found guilty of dereliction of duty for not having notified Kimmel and Short of the imminent attack on Pearl Harbor, these findings were kept from the public. Not until eleven days after the attack did the Roberts Commission, led by U. S. Supreme Court Justice Owen Roberts, find what it declared was the truth concerning the matter. According to the Commission, Kimmel and Short were the culprits. The Commission’s meetings were held behind closed doors, and Kimmel and Short were forced to retire. Some found the Commission’s proceedings questionable, including Admiral William Standley, a Roberts Commission panelist, who characterized Roberts’ actions as “crooked as a snake.”

There were another seven investigations of the Pearl Harbor attack, one of which, conducted jointly by the House and the Senate, included the testimony of Marshall and Stark that they could not recall their whereabouts on the night that Roosevelt declared war on Japan. However, their claims were contradicted by a friend of Frank Knox, the Secretary of the Navy, who said that Marshall and Stark were with Knox and Roosevelt in the White House, waiting for the Japanese to attack Pearl Harbor so that the U. S. could enter World War II. According to historian John Toland, Marshall told his senior officers, “Gentlemen, this goes to the grave with us.” Short, who had considered Marshall a personal friend, felt betrayed by Marshall’s actions in allowing him to take the fall for the Pearl Harbor attack.

There was more than one warning that the Japanese were about to bomb Pearl Harbor, including a Japanese message containing the phrase “east wind, rain,” which was know by U. S. military intelligence as the Japanese code for war against the United States. However, U. S. government officials denied that the “winds” message was ever sent or received. In addition, three days before the attack on Pearl Harbor, Australian intelligence sent a warning to Washington that it had seen a fleet of Japanese aircraft carriers bound for Hawaii, but Roosevelt dismissed this warning as a rumor initiated, for political purposes, by the Republican Party.

Toland concludes that Roosevelt acted on purpose to suppress the warnings he’d received concerning the imminent attack on Pearl Harbor because he wanted the U. S. to enter the war. “A small group of men,” he wrote, “revered and held to be most honorable by millions, had convinced themselves that it was necessary to act dishonorably for the good of their nation--and incited the war that Japan had tried [by announcing its intentions ahead of time to attack Pearl Harbor] to avoid.” Rear Admiral Robert A. Theobald, who commanded the destroyers at Pearl Harbor, agreed: “This was the president’s problem, and his solution was based on the simple fact that, while it takes two to make a fight, either one may start it.”

The Pearl Harbor Conspiracy Theory Elements

Again, it is important to remember that the claim that the president and military commanders purposely allowed the Japanese to attack Pearl Harbor is a conspiracy theory, not an actual historical event.

Here’s how the Pearl Harbor conspiracy theory stacks up against the list of conspiracy elements identified earlier:

A well-funded, clandestine group or organization with a nefarious agenda, which they seek to keep secret (the agenda will include the motive or purpose of the conspiracy). President Roosevelt and the commanders of the U. S. Army (General Marshall) and the U. S. Navy (Admiral Stark) withheld warnings that the Japanese were about to attack Pearl Harbor from the fleet commander, Admiral Kimmel, and the base commander, General Short.

The use of esoteric knowledge or scientific, medical, or technological means to implement and execute the conspiracy. The military suppressed the truth about the culpability of Marshall and Stark, who withheld the warnings of the Japanese’s planned attack on Pearl Harbor and lied about their whereabouts on the night that the president declared war against Japan, and the Roberts Commission convicted Kimmel and Short, in closed meetings, as the government’s scapegoats, forcing them to retire. Several messages used codes known by U. S. military intelligence and other intelligence organizations, such as that of the Australian government.

A scheme that involves the initiation of a specific event or set of events that has a particular, focused objective; an ongoing series of conspiratorial activities with broad goals and a social, a national, or a global end; a hierarchical confederation of several conspiracy groups with at least a few overlapping or common goals; or an historical process among one or more conspirators or conspiracy organizations dedicated to securing their goals over a period of generations, centuries, or even millennia, either through sustained or recurring organizations. Roosevelt and his conspirators wanted to involve the United States in World War II by allowing the Japanese to attack the U. S. fleet anchored at Pearl Harbor, Hawaii. Their actions later led to cover-ups by the Roberts Commission, the joint Congressional hearings, and other investigations.

One person or a group of people dedicated to discovering or exposing the conspiracy. The group may be dedicated amateurs or experts, and they may be organized loosely and informally or closely and professionally. The “truthers,” as such groups are sometimes called, may actually communicate the truth about a real conspiracy; may only believe that they are doing so; or may distort the truth to support and advance a hidden agenda of their own. An historian, several high-ranking U. S. military officers, and others sought to expose the Roosevelt conspiracy.

A sense of “us” (the good, law-abiding, patriotic, and ordinary citizenry) versus “them” (the corrupt, criminal, treasonous, and elitist conspirators). In Toland‘s words, “A small group of men, revered and held to be most honorable by millions, had convinced themselves that it was necessary to act dishonorably for the good of their nation--and incited the war that Japan had tried to avoid.”

The Denver International Airport Conspiracy Theory

The claim that the Denver International Airport is the headquarters of the New World Order’s leaders is a theory, not an actual fact. The theory goes like this:

The peculiar features of the Denver International Airport prove that it is the new World Order’s secret headquarters. Code words of possible Satanic or Masonic significance are carved into the terminal floor: Cochetopa, Sisnaajini, Dzit Dit Gaii, Braaksma, and Villarreal.

A dedication marker is inscribed with Masonic symbols (the compass and the square), and mention is made, on the marker, of two Freemason lodges in Colorado. In addition, the marker is mounted above a time capsule that was sealed during the airport’s dedication--a time capsule which may, in fact, also be a keypad with a secret purpose related to the future of the New World Order or the New World Airport Commission, which is also named on the dedication marker.

A large portion of the terminal, called the Great Hall, is named for the great hall of the Freemason lodges. Murals inside the airport depict bizarre situations and images, including a Nazi-like figure stabbing a white dove with the tip of his scimitar, dead children (an African-American, a Christian, and a Jew) laid out inside open coffins, and children worshiping a strange, rainbow-colored flower.

Outside, a huge, wild, malevolent horse with red (radioactive?) eyes rears against the sky. The configurations, or layout, of the airport’s runways are shaped like Nazi swastikas. The airport takes up twice the space of Manhattan, New York, and rests atop an underground military base, which includes space for the headquarters of the New World Order and vast holding cells for future political prisoners.

The Denver International Airport Conspiracy Theory Elements

Again, it is important to remember that the claim that the Denver International Airport is the headquarters of the New World Order’s leaders is a theory, not an actual fact.

Here’s how the Denver International Airport conspiracy theory stacks up against the list of conspiracy elements identified earlier:

A well-funded clandestine group or organization with a nefarious agenda, which they seek to keep secret (the agenda will include the motive or purpose of the conspiracy). The Freemasons and the New World Airport Commission build an airport full of strange codes, images, and symbols on a plot of ground twice as large as Manhattan.

The use of esoteric knowledge or scientific, medical, or technological means to implement and execute the conspiracy. The airport includes strange codes carved into the floor, bizarre murals depicting horrific scenes involving various ethnic and religious groups and containing esoteric images, and a keypad associated with a time capsule.

A scheme that involves the initiation of a specific event or set of events which have a particular, focused objective; an ongoing series of conspiratorial activities with broad goals and a social, a national, or a global end; a hierarchical confederation of several conspiracy groups with at least a few overlapping or common goals; or an historical process among one or more conspirators or conspiracy organizations dedicated to securing their goals over a period of generations, centuries, or even millennia, either through sustained or recurring organizations.

The airport is home to the underground headquarters of the New World Order and includes holding cells for hundreds, perhaps thousands, of future political prisoners.

One person or a group of people dedicated to exposing the discovering or exposing the conspiracy. Such a group may be dedicated amateurs or experts, and they may be organized loosely and informally or closely and professionally. The “truthers,” as such groups are sometimes called, may actually communicate the truth about a real conspiracy; may only believe that they are doing so; or may distort the truth to support and advance a hidden agenda of their own. Christians and other groups have photographed and posted pictures of the airport and its peculiar features on the Internet to publicize the existence of the New World Order’s headquarters to millions and to expose its secrets. Other individuals and groups have produced online videos that interpret and explain the secret codes, images, and symbols and relate the history of the airport’s construction.

A sense of “us” (the good, law-abiding, patriotic, and ordinary citizenry) versus “them” (the corrupt, criminal, treasonous, and elitist conspirators). “They” are the New World Order/Masonic conspirators, who want to take over the world, institute a new totalitarian sociopolitical-economic order, and enslave “us,” the everyday citizens of a democratic and capitalistic society, who honors and respects individual liberty.

Types of Characters

Like any other genre, the thriller has developed several specific types of characters who tend to recur throughout these novels. Some of these types include government agents, spies, police detectives, private detectives, scientists, computer experts, weapons experts, disguise artists, mercenaries, martial arts experts, military personnel, and adventurers.

In addition to these types of characters, thrillers often people their pages with characters who are called for by the situations of the novels’ individual plots, including situations based upon conspiracy theories. The type of conspiracy theory often suggests the specific, even specialized, characters that are apt to be relatively distinctive to a particular storyline of this type.
In addition to the general types of characters common to thrillers as a whole, those derived from a conspiracy theory might also include:

World leaders

Members of secret societies

Business tycoons

Extraterrestrial beings

Agents of disinformation and intimidation

Prison officials and guards

Hollywood producers, directors, actors, and other personnel

Assassins

“Truthers” (fanatics dedicated to collecting evidence about the conspiracy and to exposing it to the public)

Victims of the conspiracy (and innocent bystanders)

Investigative reporters

Television or radio talk show hosts

Guides or scouts

Members of ethnic, minority, or special interest groups

“Deep Throats” (that is, insiders who defect from a conspiracy group, often supplying intelligence concerning the group to
“Truthers,” investigators, media personnel, or other interested parties)

Note: Refer to Appendix 1 an annotate list of additional conspiracy theories.

Create Your Own Conspiracy Theory

In discussing how “Truthers” twist the truth to supposedly debunk conspiracy theories, Christopher Hodapp and Alice Von Kanno, the authors of Conspiracy Theories and Secret Societies for Dummies, provide a blueprint for authors of thrillers who want to create their own conspiracy theories in order to add adventure, zest, and excitement to their fiction.

Their sidebar debunking of the “documentary” Loose Change, “Screws Loose in Loose Change” (155-156), offers a textbook case. Created “by three 20-something Truthers,” Dylan Avery, Korey Rowe, and Jason Bernas, the so-called documentary uses “unsupported assertions, scurvy intimations, and some out-and-out lies” to suggest that the events of 9/11 were results of a conspiracy (155). Included among their allegations, the authors point out, in a bulleted checklist, were the following falsehoods or misrepresentations of the facts (in bold font). Following each allegation in their bulleted checklist, Hodapp and Von Kannon debunk the “debunkers”:

The fires in the Towers weren’t hot enough to melt steel. Quite the contrary--they were plenty hot enough to weaken the girders, causing them to structurally fail under the weight of the floors above.

The Empire State Building wasn’t knocked down when it was hit by a B-52, so the [World Trade Center] WTC Towers should’ve survived the smaller plane hits. The Empire State Building wasn’t hit by a B-52. It was a much smaller, lighter B-25.

Terrorist hijackers couldn’t have been flying the planes, because the moves they executed were unsafe. What part of “they were intending to crash them” do these boys not understand?

The South Tower was hit by an unmarked, gray jet, with no airline markings. Maybe it looks unmarked when played back on an iPod, but the United paint job is undeniable in frame enlargements.

$167 billion in gold was stored under the World Trade Center and was secretly removed. It was really $230 million--not chump change, but considerably less than their outrageous claim, and all of it was recovered and accounted for.

Flight 93 didn’t crash in Pennsylvania. They claim the real Flight 93 was loaded with some 200 passengers from all four planes and landed in Cleveland, where the passengers were taken off and, presumably, “disposed of.” The problem with this one being that the total manifests of all four planes couldn’t fit onboard Flight 93. At other times, they claim Flight 93 did crash in Pennsylvania, but after being shot down by the military.

A mysterious “pod” was mounted under the fuselage of one of the planes, clear evidence that it’s a massive bomb. Both planes that hit the Trade Towers were 767-200s.

Comparisons with 767s under the same lighting show a bulge where the wings join the main body of the jet. This reckless claim was so loudly debunked that the boys quickly edited it out of subsequent versions (155-56).

The Truthers also claimed that “the phone calls from loved ones onboard the hijacked planes were phonies,” the authors say, since “pilots have never allowed passengers to use cell phones in flight.” However, under fire from the public and critics alike, the documentary’s creators retracted this claim, as they suppressed their original allegation that the airplanes were equipped with bombs. When “scientists working for Popular Mechanics were able to easily disprove their assertion about cell phones, one of these shrewd journalists said in a recent documentary on 9/11 conspiracy theories, ‘Well, we’re editing that out in our new version, because we don’t’ want to loose [sic] our credibility’” (156).

How do the authors of this conspiracy piece together their theory? It seems that they use one part unenlightened ignorance, one part innovative speculation, and one part deliberate deceit.

Alter facts to fit a preconceived view or substitute lies for facts: The fire was not hot enough to melt steel (but the fire was hot enough); the smaller, older Empire State Building survived being hit by a B-52 (although the Empire State Building was actually hit by a smaller B-25); and Flight 93 didn’t crash in Pennsylvania; it was loaded with passengers from all four planes and landed in Cleveland, where the passengers were taken off and, presumably, “disposed of” (but the total manifests of all four planes couldn’t fit onboard Flight 93)

Introduce irrelevancies that sound significant: It’s unconvincing to assume that the terrorists would commit acts that are unsafe to themselves (but they were suicidal fanatics who willingly died for their beliefs--and knowingly killed others as well).

Omit details that contradict the conspiracy theory: The planes were unmarked (but they only seem to be unmarked; when the film footage of the attack is played, the airline’s markings are clearly visible).

Exaggerate facts, especially those that suggest a motive for a hidden or secret agenda on the part of the conspirators (and, again, omit any contradictory details): $167 billion in gold, stored under the World Trade Center, was secretly removed (but it was really $230 million, all of which recovered and accounted for).

Offer a sinister interpretation of anything that appears unusual or anomalous: A “pod” under the airplane’s fuselage contained a bomb (but the “pod” was really just a bulge at the junction of the main body of the aircraft and its wing).

Eliminate (or modify) details that are easily disproved or that may cause others to summarily reject your theory: The idea that the Flight 93 passengers lied about having communicated with their families before the airplane crashed offended many and its basis (that cell phone communication with relatives was impossible aboard the flight) was disproved by scientists, so this part of the conspiracy theory was abandoned.

Let’s consider how you can use these techniques to generate a conspiracy by examining a controversial issue, such as global warming (climate change). Although more scientists than not accept as true the notion that the planet’s temperature is gradually increasing, some do not believe that such a change is taking place. Even among those who do believe that global warming is happening, some do not consider such change to be dangerous to the welfare of plants, animals, or human beings.

Let’s see how to use this controversial issue to develop a conspiracy theory.

First, there is no need to eliminate or alter facts that are “friendly” to your claim that global warming is the product of a conspiracy among scientists and government officials who one to get rich quick off by promoting the supposed dangers of climate change. These facts seem friendly to the idea of global warming as a conspiracy theory rather than a reality, so you can accept them as they are:

The lack of a long-term record of temperature changes prevent scientists from ascertaining whether the warmer temperatures observed during the past few years is anything more than a temporary trend.

The data concerning global warming are sometimes unclear.

Some scientists’ belief that global warming is occurring may affect how they interpret data; they may fit the data to their assumptions rather than considering the data objectively.

If it exists, global warming may be a natural event, not one that is being caused by human behavior or the use of technology.

Even if global warming is happening, it presents no dangers to living organisms, for plants, animals, and humans will adapt to climate changes.

Now, with regard to facts that are “unfriendly” to the conspiracy theory, those that contradict, rather than support, it, use one part unenlightened ignorance, one part innovative speculation, and one part deliberate deceit, or, more specifically:

Alter facts to fit a preconceived view or substitute lies for facts.

Introduce irrelevancies that sound significant:

Omit details that contradict the conspiracy theory:

Exaggerate facts, especially those that suggest a motive for a hidden or secret agenda on the part of the conspirators.

Offer a sinister interpretation of anything that appears unusual or anomalous:

Eliminate (or modify) details that are easily disproved or that may cause others to summarily reject your theory:

Start by listing the “unfriendly;” facts: Then, fit them to the theory that global warming is a conspiracy, not a reality (changes are indicated in bold font):

Eleven of the past twelve years have been the hottest since 1850. This fact sounds impressive--if one forgets that, by the same yardstick, out of 100 years, 88 percent of them have not been unusually warm. Global warming conspirators cherry-pick their data to suggest that harmless trends as long-term conditions. (The point ignored her is that the 88 percent is unimportant; what matters is that eleven of twelve most recent years of history indicate that there is a sudden, rapid warming of the planet.)

The rate at which the planet is warming has doubled in the past century. Again, this may sound impressive, but, by scientists’ own admission, even if the planet’s temperature is increasing at such a rate, the actual increase in temperature measures only .74 degrees Celsius. (The debunking of this claim ignores the point that “even small changes in climate can have major effects” and that, according to NASA, “during the last ice age (ice ages recur roughly every 50,000 to 100,000 years), the earth's average temperature was only 5 Celsius degrees cooler than modern temperature averages”).

Up to a depth of 3,000 feet (and maybe more), oceans are warmer than they have been before.

Glaciers have decreased in both the Northern and the Southern hemispheres, causing a rise in sea levels, arctic temperatures have increased dramatically during the last century, and frozen ground in the arctic regions have thawed by seven percent since 1900. There have been more sunny days lately. However, such days are effects of weather conditions, not climate changes. (This explanation purposely confuses weather, which is “local and short-term” with climate., which is regional or global and “long-term.”)

Precipitation has increased in many rainy parts of the world and has decreased in drier regions, droughts are longer and cover more land than they have in times past, heat waves are more frequent and intense and cold spells less frequent and less intense than they have been in the past, and the intensity of tropical storms has increased. Weather conditions, which cause rain, drought, heat waves, cold spells, and tropical storms of greater or lesser intensity are also effects of the changes in weather and do not indicate any long-term climate changes. (Again, this explanation purposely confuses weather, which is “local and short-term” with climate., which is regional or global and “long-term.”)

By accepting “friendly” facts as true and explaining (or explaining away) “unfriendly” facts, a strong case can be built for global warming (or any other controversial issue) as comprising nothing more than a conspiracy on the part of people who have much to gain by frightening people with such unwarranted claims.

However, make sure that the conspirators do have a lot to gain by promulgating their conspiracy theory; otherwise, there would be no motivation for them to spend the vast amounts of time, money, and other resources to attempt to get others to believe and accept their theory as true. In the case of global warming, if it were a conspiracy theory rather than a reality, the conspirators would have much to gain through legislation that outlaws or penalizes the use of some energy sources (petroleum products, coal, and incandescent light bulbs, for example, while requiring or encouraging the use of alternative energy sources (wind, solar energy, hydroelectric generators) and activities (energy conservation, recycling).

Note: some facts and other material for this segment of this handout were quoted or paraphrased from the online article, “How Global Warming Works“ (http://science.howstuffworks.com/environmental/green-science/global-warming7.htm).

Use the same techniques to create a conspiracy theory of your own! (Remember to include the elements that are typical of most, if not all, actual conspiracy theories.)

Evaluating Evidence For Conspiracy Theories

Knowing how to evaluate the evidence that conspiracy theorists provide to support their claims can not only help one debunk those claims, but it can also disclose techniques that one can use him- or herself to more readily develop his or her own, original conspiracy theory.

The authors of Conspiracy Theories & Secret Societies identify a number of principles which facilitate the creation of conspiracy theories:

“Nothing happens by accident.”
“Nothing is as it seems.”
“Everything is connected “

Because facts can be twisted, they cannot be trusted.

“Lack of proof is proof.”

Conspirators “control the media, business, banks, universities, [and] governments” (among other things) and use these organizations to misdirect, deceive, suppress, and “discredit” their enemies (21-23).

The authors also identify three problems from which, “psychologists” and “psychiatrists” claim, conspiracy theorists suffer:

Conspiracy theorists suffer from apophenia: they find patterns in meaningless or disconnected images, numbers, words, and other data (the face on Mars).

Conspiracy theorists suffer from confirmation bias: they develop a theory and make all evidence conform to it, ignoring contrary evidence altogether.

Conspiracy theorists suffer from cognitive dissonance, holding mutually contradictory thoughts as true without stress (23-24).
In general, the authors point out, there are three types of conspiracy theories:



Event conspiracies
Systemic conspiracies
Super conspiracies ((24-25).
The authors recommend that conspiracy theories be tested by checking “sources” (does the author cite fellow conspiracy theorists in his or her bibliography?); check the credentials and writings of any experts who support conspiracy theories; examine whether conspiracy theorists have treated their subject in full and without bias (make sure that they have not ignored inconvenient facts); “separate facts from emotional claims”; distrust “eyewitness testimony” and other anecdotal evidence; “be alert for unsupportable statements”; and “examine how authoritative people are portrayed”: are they fairly depicted or represented as human monsters, madmen, or fools? (31-32)

Your Turn!

Use the elements typical of conspiracy theories to create your own, original conspiracy theory; this theory will become the basis for your thriller’s plot synopsis:

A well-funded, clandestine group or organization with a nefarious agenda, which they seek to keep secret (the agenda includes the motive or purpose of the conspiracy). The agenda could be to cover up the cause or purpose of an event (the AIDS virus as a means of exterminating African-Americans); to suppress the truth about the nature of an action or an event (the moon landing); to initiate an event or a series of events (usher in the Fourth Reich); to end a regime, organization, order, or organization (to destroy democracy from within the American political system); to introduce social or political changes (institutionalize special rights for a small segment of the general population); or to deny that an historical event or series of events occurred (the Holocaust or the moon landing). __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The use of esoteric knowledge (alchemy, art, secret codes); sophisticated deception (doctored technology, historical revisionism, systematic propaganda, misdirection and redirection); or scientific, medical or technological means (viruses, parasites, chemical poisoning or contamination); or intimidation and force (martial law, incarceration, or public beatings, maiming, and executions) to implement and execute the conspiracy. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

A scheme that involves the initiation of a specific event or set of events that has a particular, focused objective (the assassination of President John F. Kennedy); an ongoing series of conspiratorial activities with broad goals and a social, a national, or a global end (genocide against an ethnic group or the takeover of a country through the infiltration of its government or educational system); a hierarchical confederation of several conspiracy groups with at least a few overlapping or common goals (international capitalists’ control of government, economic, educational, and religious organizations); or an historical process among one or more conspirators or conspiracy organizations dedicated to securing their goals over a period of generations, centuries, or even millennia, either through sustained or recurring organizations (the Masons or the rise of subsequent “reichs”). __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One person or a group of people dedicated to discovering or exposing the conspiracy. Such a group may be dedicated amateurs or experts, and they may be organized loosely and informally or closely and professionally. They follow events, pursue suspected conspirators, share information with themselves and the public, store and safeguard data pertaining to their investigations, and protect and defend themselves and one another when possible. The “truthers,” as such groups are sometimes called, may actually communicate the truth about a real conspiracy; may only believe that they are doing so; or may distort the truth to support and advance a hidden agenda of their own. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A sense of “us” (the good, law-abiding, patriotic, and ordinary citizenry) versus “them” (the corrupt, criminal, treasonous, and elitist conspirators). _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Plot-Development Tools

The following plot-development tools will be used:

Gustav Freytag’s Analysis of Dramatic Structure
Fill-in-the-Blanks Plot Template
Gustav Freytag’s Analysis of Dramatic Structure

Literary critic Gustav Freytag divided plots into five parts, or acts: (1) exposition, (2) rising action, (3) turning point, or climax, (4) falling action, and (5) resolution (comedy) or catastrophe (tragedy). In addition, he identifies two other points: (1) the inciting moment, which concludes the exposition as it initiates the rising action and (2) an optional moment of final suspense, in which the reader or viewer is left in doubt for a moment as to whether the protagonist shall succeed or fail in his or her attempt to realize the goal that he or she has set or that has been set for him or her.

In the exposition, background information (such as the introduction of the protagonist and other characters, the identification of the setting, and the introduction of the basic, or main, conflict) is provided.

The inciting moment initiates the rising action, wherein the conflict is complicated as a series of increasingly more difficult obstacles is placed between the protagonist and his or realization of his or her goal

The turning point, or climax, occurs as the protagonist begins to succeed or fail at his or her attempt to achieve his or her goal. (In a comedy, which is defined as a story in which the main character is better off at the end of the story than he or she was at the beginning of the story, things will go badly for him or her at the beginning of the story but will begin to improve at the turning point, or climax. In a tragedy, which is defined as a story in which the main character is worse off at the end of the story than he or she was at the beginning of the story, things will go well for him or her at the beginning of the story but will begin to worsen at the turning point, or climax.)

The falling action unravels the conflict that was complicated during the rising action.

If the story is a comedy, it will end in a resolution, whereas, if it is a tragedy, it will end in a catastrophe. With this information in mind, you can use the following template to structure the plot of your story:

Fill-in-the-Blank Plot Template

Referring to your conspiracy theory, use the following template to create a synopsis of your thriller’s plot. The use of this template ensures that your novel has all the ingredients of a fully developed story: characters, motivation, conflict, suspense, setting, dramatic structure, unity, a cause-and-effect sequence among the incidents of the action, and theme.

By employing this template, you, the author, will have both an overview of your thriller’s entire plot, a guide to the writing of your novel, and the context that you need to understand the relationships of the parts of the story to the whole and the meaning of the entire story.

However, when you actually write your novel, you may wish to reorder the incidents for dramatic and narrative purposes.

For example, most thrillers begin in media res (in the middle of the action) and use flashbacks or dialogue to fill in needed exposition (explanatory or background information), and most end each chapter on a cliffhanger--a moment of high suspense that encourages readers to read the next chapter--and the next. Therefore, think of this template as a means of summarizing your plot and of including all the necessary ingredients of the story, not necessarily as the final approach that you should take in writing the novel.

Begin by defining your conspiracy in a single sentence: ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The main character, ____________________, wants to ____________________ because ____________________, but he or she must struggle against ____________________, who wants ____________________ because _____________________. This story takes place in ____________________ (location) in ____________________ (time period). To attain his or her goal, ____________________ (the main character) must overcome the following, increasingly difficult obstacles: ____________________, ____________________, and ____________________ (add more if desired). For ____________________ (the main character), for whom everything goes more or less ____________________ (well or poorly) at the beginning of the story, the turning point (climax) occurs when he or she ____________________, and then the opposite state of affairs ensues, as/when things begin to _____________________ (worsen or improve) by ____________________, ____________________, and ____________________ (add more if desired). At the end of the story, ____________________ (the main character) ____________________ (attains or does not attain) his or her goal, because ____________________ (reason), learning that ____________________ (lesson learned from experience, the story’s theme) and, as a result, changes by ____________________ (how the main character changes).

 
Here is an example:

Begin by defining your conspiracy in a single sentence: To suppress protests against state-sponsored or -sanctioned activities, the United States government uses plainclothes agents, FBI and otherwise, to infiltrate political protest organizations and to incite riots.

The main character, FBI Special Agent Kimberly Wilder, wants to expose the government’s use of undercover agents to infiltrate political protest organizations and incite riots to suppress political protest against state-sponsored or -sanctioned activities because she witnessed the death of a child during one such riot, in which she was involved as an infiltrator, but she must struggle against high-level government leaders and her colleagues, who want to continue and expand these operations because they have been proven to be very effective in suppressing opposition to the government’s conduct of illegal and immoral operations. This story takes place in Washington, D. C., various other U. S. cities, and the Middle East in the present day. To attain his or her goal, Kimberly must overcome the following, increasingly difficult obstacles: gain the trust of the protesters she’s infiltrated, convince the media that she is not delusional (as the government claims) and the conspiracy exists, enlist the aid of several of her former fellow FBI agents, and avoid being captured by the government as she exposes the conspiracy. For Kimberly, for whom everything goes more or less poorly at the beginning of the story, the turning point (climax) occurs when she admits to her role in infiltrating a protest organization on national television, confessing how her actions inadvertently led to the death of an innocent child and provides the names of a half-dozen other whistleblowers, and then the opposite state of affairs ensues, as things begin to by improve when Congress initiates an investigation of the FBI and other government agencies named as conspirators and several conspirators are indicted, tried, convicted, and sentenced to prison. At the end of the story, Kimberly attains her goal, because she identifies and motivates others to expose the conspiracy, learning that the will of the people and their rights as citizens outweigh the clandestine interests of a corrupt faction of the federal government and big business, and, as a result, changes by becoming a private investigator who serves as a watchdog against similar government abuses of citizens‘ rights.

Note: My idea for this storyline was inspired by an online news report, “Witnesses describe State Fair mob attacks,” by 620 WTMJ News Radio, part of which reads:

WEST ALLIS - Witnesses tell Newsradio 620 WTMJ and TODAY’S TMJ4 of a mob of young people attacking innocent fair-goers at the end of the opening night of State Fair, with some callers claiming a racially-charged scene. Milwaukee Police confirmed there were assaults outside the fair. . . .. . . “They were attacking everybody for no reason whatsoever.”
Add a single sentence that suggests that there may be a sequel

After developing your story’s synopsis, add a “However” statement at the end, suggesting that the story will continue or, in other words, that a sequel may follow.

Here’s an example:

However, Kimberly finds that the conspirators are not about to let bygones be bygones. Enraged by what they regard as her “betrayal,” a remnant of unidentified loyalists within the corrupt FBI-military cadre seek revenge, planning to put an end to her life (and, therefore, to her political and legal opposition to them), while making an example of her to others and paving the way for them to continue their suppression of political protest by violent means without her to thwart them. Meanwhile, as she dodges or frustrates their attempts to assassinate her, staying alive must become her first priority.

Assessment Checklist

Use this checklist to assess the conspiracy theory that will become the basis of the “actual” conspiracy in your thriller. Any blank in which you can add a checkmark indicates that the element associated with it is satisfactory. However, if you cannot check one or more of the blanks, your inability to do so indicates an element or elements that require improvement.

Place a checkmark in each of the blanks that precede an item that is satisfactory; if you wish, you can jot yourself notes in the blanks that follow each item on the checklist. (You may want to photocopy this checklist so that you can use it more than once.)


____ The group of conspirators is well funded by _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ The group of conspirators’ secret agenda involves _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ The group uses one of more of the following to execute its conspiracy: esoteric knowledge, sophisticated deception, scientific or medical means, intimidation and force: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My conspiracy involves a scheme to initiate a specific event with a particular and focused objective; an ongoing series of conspiratorial activities with broad goals, and a social, national, or global end; a hierarchical confederation of several conspiracy groups with at least a few overlapping goals; or an historical process among one or more conspirators or conspiracy organizations dedicated to securing their goals over a period of generations or longer: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My conspiracy includes a sense of “us” (the good guys) versus “them” (the bad guys): _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller features characters that are typical to the thriller genre: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller includes characters that are especially appropriate to my thriller’s particular conspiracy: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ In my conspiracy, everything is connected through cause and effect, not circumstance or coincidence: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ In my conspiracy, appearances are usually deceiving: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ Although I may have changed the sequence of events for dramatic and narrative purposes, my thriller has an exposition, a rising action, a turning point (climax), a falling action, and a resolution (if a comedy) or a catastrophe (if a tragedy) _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller also has an inciting moment: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller has a moment of final suspense (not required, but strongly recommended): _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My protagonist has a strong, believable motive for opposing the conspirators: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller contains plenty of strong, believable conflict: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller is suspenseful throughout: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller is usually fast paced: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ The incident in my thriller’s plot are related through cause and effect; nothing is merely circumstantial or coincidental: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller has appropriate and interesting settings: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____ My thriller suggests an important lesson about people or life in general: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Appendix 1: Other Examples of Conspiracy Actual Theories: A Reference List

New World Order: International elites control and manipulate governments, industry, and media organizations worldwide through the use of central banking and other means. They fund and sometimes cause most of major wars, execute false flag attacks to generate support for themselves, and control the world economy, causing inflation and depressions whenever it suits them to do so.

Federal Reserve System: Created in 1913, the Federal Reserve System is the central bank of the United States, although it is not a part of the government. It transfers wealth from the United States’ poor and middle classes to international bankers of the New World Order.

False Flag Operations: Covert operations conducted by governments, corporations, or other organizations, but made to appear as if they are executed by other entities.

Military-Industrial Complex: The military is in cahoots with industrialists and other big businesses to profit politically and economically from wars waged for these purposes.

Freemasonry: The many conspiracy theories pertaining to the Masons relate to the control of the government, particularly in the United States and the United Kingdom, through religious, (often anti-Christian or Satanic) and cultural (usually involving popular entertainment) means and may worship the devil.

Chemtrails: Chemtrails contain chemicals or biological agents purposely sprayed on the population by governments or other authorities.

U. S.-Extraterrestrial Allegiance: The United States government conspires with extraterrestrials in the abduction and manipulation of American citizens.

Global Warming: Dr. William Gray lists fifteen reasons for the global warming hysteria, including the need for an enemy following the end of the Cold War and the desire among scientists, government leaders, and environmentalists to find a political cause that would enable them to “organize, propagandize, force conformity and exercise political influence.
Big world government could best lead (and control) us to a better world!” In this article, Gray also identifies the election of Al Gore to the vice presidency as the start of his problems with federal funding: the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration stopped giving him research grants, as did NASA.

911: The U. S., Israel, or Iraq government orchestrated the attacks themselves.

Apollo Moon Landing: The moon landings never happened, but was faked by NASA with possible CIA and Hollywood support.

Barcodes: Barcodes are used to control citizens of a world government or are Satanic in intent.

Area 51: In Area 51, alien spacecraft (including material supposedly recovered at Roswell) are stored, examined, and reverse-engineered; alien astronauts (living and dead) are examined; and aircraft based on alien technology is manufactured.

Wingdings Font: “NYC” in Wingdings was rendered as Skull and crossbones symbol, Star of David, and thumbs up gesture to signify Bill Gates’ approval of killing Jews, especially those from New York City.

Princess Diana Assassinated: There was a plot to murder Diana, Princess of Wales, because she intended to marry Dodi Fayed, intended to convert to Islam, was pregnant, and planned to visit the holy land. Organizations responsible for her death include French Intelligence, the British Royal Family, the press, the British Intelligence services MI5 or MI6, the CIA, Mossad, the Freemasons, and/or the IRA

Appendix 2: Starters

It is often helpful to start a conspiracy theory by summarizing the gist, or general idea, of it in a single sentence that is later embellished by applying all the elements of the typical conspiracy theory and using the plot-development template to flesh out narrative details. The single-sentence summary of the conspiracy theory should explain the nature of the conspiracy, who or what is behind the conspiracy, and the purpose of the conspiracy (what the conspirators hope to gain from the conspiracy). Here are a few examples to serve as models and, perhaps, to inspire your own starters:

Aliens caused Earth’s climate change to exterminate human beings so the aliens can claim the planet for themselves.

Entrepreneurs (paranormal researchers, scholars, tour guides) create crop circles to support and further their respective careers.

Companies that gather personal and financial data from clients, ostensibly to protect their identities, use this information to steal their identities.

Top secret Area 51 is nothing more than a decoy to distract citizens and divert their attention from the actual clandestine military projects that are undertaken elsewhere.

In cooperation with a federal government behavior-modification program, cereal manufacturers put a special food additive in their products.

Signs warning of the presence of bears are purposely posted too far down the trails to warn national park visitors so that some are killed by the bears, their deaths intimidating others from visiting the parks, just as the park authorities intend.

Soft news stories are aired by powerful interest groups and government organizations to distract the public from more important commercial, economic, and political events.

To ensure future funding from public and private donors, universities coerce scientific researchers to conclude what their financers want the research to prove or disprove.

Appendix 3: A List of Thrillers

Several thrillers involve conspiracies. Among the better-known conspiracy thrillers are:

The Crying of Lot 49 (Thomas Pynchon): Protagonist Oedipa Maas must decide what is real and what is illusion when she uncovers a mysterious underground organization, Trystero (which may or may not actually exist), which vies (or seems to vie) with two mail-delivery groups that defeated it, Thurn and Taxis.

The Da Vinci Code (Dan Brown): The Priory of Sion and Opus Dei battle over the suppression of the continued bloodline of Jesus, through a child he fathered by Mary Magdalene.

Dreadful Sanctuary (Eric Frank Russell): A global conspiracy seeks to prevent humanity from reaching the stars via space travel.

Foucault’s Pendulum (Umberto Eco): Employees of a publishing company invent a conspiracy of their own, but many mistakenly believe that the theory is real; finally, even its inventors begin to wonder whether their supposedly age-old, secret plan is fictional or factual.

Gravity’s Rainbow (Thomas Pynchon): Characters seek to discover the true meaning of Schwarzgerät, a black device installed in a rocket that has been assigned an equally mysterious serial number, 00000.

Illuminatus! (Robert Shea and Robert Anton Wilson): An ancient and global web of conspirators may or may not have been involved in the assassinations of President John F. Kennedy, his brother Attorney General Robert F. Kennedy, and Martin Luther King, Jr. and may or may not have been associated with Adolph Hitler, John Dillinger, and extraterrestrial beings.

Ministry of Fear (Graham Greene): Having survived World War II, a band of Nazis seem bent upon establishing the Fourth Reich.

The Thirty-Nine Steps (John Buchan): A plot is afoot to destabilize Europe and precipitate a world war.

The Manchurian Candidate (Richard Condon): The Chinese have secretly brainwashed an American soldier to serve them as their agent and assassin.

Winter Kills (Richard Condon): The protagonist attempts to verify the deathbed confession of a man who claims that the president was not killed by a lone assassin, as a Congressional committee has determined, but by a team of killers who orchestrated the murder.

Not all of the novels listed below uses a conspiracy as the basis of their plots, but each is a thriller. (In addition to thrillers which involve conspiracies, others, as thriller author James Patterson points out, focus upon law, espionage, action-adventure, medicine, police procedures, romance, history, politics, religion, and technology (“Introduction,’ Thriller).. As such, they demonstrate the genre’s suspenseful and adventurous qualities, employing tense situations, mysteries, menaces, and other elements that, in Patterson’s words, create “an intensity of emotions . . . particularly those of apprehension and exhilaration, of excitement and breathlessness, all designed to generate that all-important thrill” (“Introduction,’ Thriller).

The following authors are especially known for the thrillers they write:

Eric Ambler
Peter Benchley
William Bernhardt
Dan Brown
Raymond Chandler
Lee Child
Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child
Tom Clancy
Mary Higgins Clark
Richard Condon
Michael Connelly
Robin Cook
Michael Crichton
Clive Cussler
Jeffrey Deaver
Ted Dekker
Joy Fielding
Ian Fleming
Ken Follett
Frederick Forsyth
W. E. B. Griffin
John Grisham
Dashiell Hammett
Thomas Harris
Stephen King
Dean Koontz
John Le Carré
John Lutz
David Morell
Perm O’Shaughnessy
Richard North Patterson
James Rollins
Craig Thomas
Scott Turow
Mary Willis Walker

Some of the more popular thrillers include:

A Stranger Is Watching (Mary Higgins Clark)
A Cry in the Night (Mary Higgins Clark)
Along Came a Spider (James Patterson)
Angels and Demons (Dan Brown)
The Big Sleep (Raymond Chandler)
The Brotherhood of the Rose (David Morell)
Clear and Present Danger (Tom Clancy)
Coma (Robin Cook)
Cujo (Stephen King)
The Da Vinci Code (Dan Brown)
The Deep (Peter Benchley)
Deliverance (James Dickey)
Farewell, My Lovely (Raymond Chandler)
First Blood (David Morell)
Foucault’s Pendulum (Umberto Eco)
Gerald’s Game (Stephen King)
The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon (Stephen King)
The Good Guy (Dean Koontz)
The Good Husband (Dean Koontz)
The Hunt for Red October (Tom Clancy)
The Ice Limit (Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child)
Intensity (Dean Koontz)
Jaws (Peter Benchley)
Misery (Stephen King)
The Name of the Rose (Umberto Eco)
Patriot Games (Tom Clancy)
Red Dragon (Thomas Harris)
Riptide (Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child)
The Silence of the Lambs (Thomas Harris)
The Spy Who Came in from the Cold (John le Carré)
The Spy Who Loved Me (Ian Fleming)
Sole Survivor (Dean Koontz)
Subterranean (James Rollins)
The Taking of Pelham One Two Three (Morton Freedgood, writing as John Godey)
Thunderball (Ian Fleming)
Ticktock (Dean Koontz)

Appendix 4: Bestselling Pseudo-Scientific “Non-Fiction”

Accounts of (Alleged) Conspiracies

In a chapter of Voodoo Histories: The Role of the Conspiracy Theory in Shaping Modern History, David Aaronovitch identifies the authors and works of pseudo-intellectuals who have published bestselling books--sometimes whole series of bestselling books--in which they document (after a fashion) what they claim are actual conspiracies. I offer summaries of these books as a means of suggesting how you could develop similar, but original, more fully developed conspiracy theories as the bases for the plots of your thrillers.

Aaronovitch cites the following authors and books as examples of the work of “pseudo-scholars”:

Worlds in Collision by Immanuel Velikovsky
Chariots of the Gods? Unsolved Mysteries of the Past and
Return of the Gods: Evidence of Extraterrestrial Visitations by Erich von Daniken (who, according to Aaronovitch, also wrote “twenty-six” other volumes on the same subject, “paleo-contact” between early human societies and extraterrestrial visitors, which, worldwide, have “sold sixty-three million copies”)

The Sign and the Seal: Quest for the Lost Ark of the Covenant and Fingerprints of the Gods by Graham Hancock

The Passover Plot by Hugh J. Schonfield

The Holy Blood and the Holy Grail by Michael Baigent, Richard Leigh, and Henry Lincoln

Worlds in Collision: Published in 1950, Velikovsky’s book is the granddaddy of its ilk. Among the first of its kind, the text offers an abundance of footnoted source material to bolster its incredible claims that the eruption of Venus from Jupiter and the expelled planet’s resulting close passage to Earth altered both Earth’s orbit and its axis, causing the earthshaking catastrophes mentioned in the Bible and the mythologies of ancient Chinese, Indian, and Mediterranean nations. Scientists’ immediate and continued rejection of Velikovsky’s thesis did nothing to slow its sales.

Chariots of the Gods?: This 1968 book contends that ancient astronauts from other planets, perceived by primitive humans, gave technological marvels and religious creeds to their worshipers, leading to the founding of civilization. Von Daniken seeks to back up his claims by pointing to artifacts and structures that seem too sophisticated to have been built by the human hands of the day, including the Egyptian pyramids, Stonehenge, Easter Island’s Moai, Peru’s Nazca lines, and the Peri Reis map; passages from the Bible that seem to describe human contact with aliens, such as Ezekiel’s reference to cherubim, Moses’ receipt of instructions from God as to how to design and construct the Ark of the Covenant, and the destruction of Sodom and Gomorrah; and bits and pieces of lore from comparative mythology which are supposed to verify the idea that the aliens’ influence upon ancient humanity was global, not merely local. Scientific reactions to Chariots of the Gods? were more than skeptical; they were incredulous, and many took pains to debunk the half-baked theories that the book’s author presented, some accusing von Daniken of having plagiarized from Louis Pauwels and Jacques Bergier’s 1960 book, The Morning of the Magicians. This criticism, however, did not prevent von Daniken from publishing Return of the Gods and a number of other bestselling sequels.

Return of the Gods: Evidence of Extraterrestrial Visitations: Published in 1997, this book argues that religion--and, indeed, history itself--needs to be reinterpreted in light of the theory, presented by von Daniken himself, that the Earth has been repeatedly visited by extraterrestrials who have taken an interest in the progress of human civilization and who continue to monitor and visit the human species. Von Daniken reveals the truth behind the Biblical accounts of the angels of God’s eviction of Lucifer from heaven and of the origin of the nephilim (the giant offspring of alien-human interbreeding) and explains, among other things, where the gods of India originated (outer space). Other books in von Daniken’s series include Gods from Outer Space (1970), The Gold of the Gods (1972), In Search of Ancient Gods (1973), Miracles of the Gods (1974), and--well, you get the picture.

The Sign and the Seal: Quest for the Lost Ark of the Covenant: Supposedly based upon divine revelation, this 1992 book, supposedly traces the circuitous route of the Biblical ark of the covenant from its Egyptian origins, to Jerusalem, and back to Africa. Full of references to secret codes, lost treasures, “White Knights,” mazes, ghosts, and devils, the book’s contents virtually guarantee its success.

Fingerprints of the Gods: This 1995 book bills itself as revealing “the true origins of civilization“ by its “connecting [of] puzzling clues scattered throughout the world,” so that its author provides “compelling evidence of a technologically and culturally advanced civilization that was destroyed and obliterated from human memory”; its table of contents offers further clues as to its appeal to the masses; the text describes “a map of hidden places,” refers to “a Lost Science,” alludes to

“The Inca Trail to the Past,” to the existence of giants, to the apocalypse, to the worship of serpents, to a fall of “Black Rain,” and to enough other antiquities and mysteries--or mysteries of antiquity--to whet most readers’ appetites.

The Holy Blood and the Holy Grail: Many of the authors’ ideas are offensive and even blasphemous to Christians. This book, published in 1982, claims that Jesus did not survive his crucifixion; that he had one or more children by Mary Magdalene; that, after his death, she spirited their offspring off to live, first among a Jewish sect and then among the Merovingians, a family of European royals; that, after the Merovingians are driven out by the Carolingians, Mary and her child or children are accepted, after a time in hiding, by the House of Lorraine; that the Priory of Sion, a secret group once associated with the Knights Templar, remain bearers of these secrets and the responsibility of preserving the divine bloodline; that clues concerning the whole state of affairs are discernable in certain works of art; and that the Catholic Church is also privy to the survival of Jesus’ seed (and allows itself to be blackmailed by a priest who decodes a parchment that tells the tale. If this plot, which is supposed to be actual history, sounds familiar, it should: Dan Brown was sued for plagiarizing it (unsuccessfully, as it turns out) in writing his novel, The Da Vinci Code (2003). This book is a good example of the faux-scholarship of which Aaronovitch writes, for, as Aaronovitch points out, “the 1996 edition” of the book is buttressed by “thirty-six pages of footnotes, a thirteen-page bibliography detailing works in English, French, and German, and twenty-four pages of photographs” which provide a sense of “popular scholarship” (201).

Saturday, December 29, 2007

Toppers

copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman


We all have our ideas as to which movies are the best of their kind, which is fine, of course, as long as we’re able to give some indication as to why we hold these views (or, if you prefer, prejudices). Here are my picks, awarded one (terrible!) to five (great!) skulls, and the reasons behind them:

10. Tremors: Giant, burrowing worms? It’s campy. It’s funny. It also has it’s moments of sheer fear. Three stars.

9. It: The Terror from Beyond Space: A hungry alien aboard a spaceship is never seen--until it’s too late. The monster earns this one three stars.

8. Invaders from Mars: Sure, it’s sci fi, but anyone who thinks it’s not also horror hasn’t seen it. When even one’s parents can become something else--something alien--we’re in nightmare land, for sure. Three stars.

7. Halloween: There’s Jamie Lee Curtis. There’s also Michael Myers. Sibling rivalry stalks the silver screen, drenching us in the blood of teen victims. When her brother’s one of the undead and he has a yen for fratricide, what’s a poor girl to do? You can almost feel that oh-so-phallic knife as it rips and tears the maidens’ tender flesh. Babysitting’s overrated, but, at four skulls, this movie’s not.

6. A Nightmare on Elm Street: Some wouldn’t rate it as high, but I love the premise, which allows even the stupidest incidents, because, after all, anything’s possible in a dream. This movie conveys an honest, usually realistic sense of what it’s like to be trapped inside one’s own nightmare, and Freddy Kreuger’s a hoot. The protagonist, Nancy, is fetching, too, in a girl-next-door sort of way. Four skulls don’t seem too many.

5. The Thing (original): Sci fi, sure, but with a subtext of horror that’s not always submerged. Imagine being trapped inside a remote arctic outpost, far from the crowd’s maddening strife, with a thawed-out shape-shifter out for blood--your blood--and you get just the faintest impression of the claustrophobic terror this flick unleashes. James Arness makes a pretty good Thing, too. Four skulls.

4. King Kong (original): The werewolf writ large (and transformed into a gorilla). Besides, it’s beauty who kills the beast, not the other way around. The remake starring Naomi Watts has better special effects, but the original, although a bit campy, is superb for its time. It deserves four stars.

3. Psycho: Dated? Sure. But the shower scene! The creepy mansion. The fleabag motel. Anthony Perkins as Norman Bates. Directed by Alfred Hitchcock. Based, in part, at least, on America’s worst serial killer of all time, Ed Gein. These elements alone make this a great among horror movies and rates it five skulls.

2. The Exorcist: The special effects may not be quite so special anymore, but it’s hard to beat the plot. What parent hasn’t wondered, at least once, whether his or her child isn’t possessed by the devil? The revolving head and the pea soup vomit alone are worth a visit to the Georgetown residence where priests take on the adversary of God himself. Five skulls for sure!

1. Alien: Some might argue, quite reasonably, that this is really a sci fi pic. It is. But it’s also a horror movie, in a broader context, because of the spectacle of blood, guts, and gore. The constant escalation of suspense and outright terror also qualify this film as a horror movie. The monsters, based upon the artwork of H. R. Giger, don’t hurt, either. It’s definitely a pulse-pounder and worthy of five skulls.

Value as a Clue to Horror

Copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman

Life is always fragile. One might suppose, however, that, before the advancements in science and technology that we enjoy (sometimes) today, the world must have been fraught with many more perils. Human life must have been especially precarious without the benefits of such modern marvels as antibiotics, computers, incandescent light, and firearms, to name but a few. Pneumonia, tornados, the blindness imposed by darkness, and inefficient or unreliable weapons must have caused many deaths that, today, could be averted or avoided. No wonder Gilgamesh sought immortality. Life in his day must have been both mean and brief. What did others seek? The treasures that were the objects of their quests tell us the things their societies valued most. Whatever threatened these treasures represented their fears, because we fear what we may lose (or want but may never gain). If Gilgamesh sought immortality, he valued life and, consequently, feared death, which may be the greatest loss of all.

“The wages of sin,” the Bible tells us, “is death,” and this is frequently the punishment that God metes out to the unrepentant, as he did with regard to Adam and Eve, to the civilization that existed at the time of the flood, to the residents of Sodom, and to many others throughout the pages of both Testaments. However, according to Christian thought, there are two types of death: physical and spiritual, as the following scripture suggests:
And fear not them which kill the body, but are not able to kill the soul: but rather fear him which is able to destroy both the soul and body in hell. --
Matthew 10:28

The one who can destroy both the body and the soul in hell is God, and, many times, the Bible warns the faithful to “fear God,” as does Matthew 10:20. There is a worse condition that death and a worse place than the grave, as the damned find out when they arrive to spend an eternity’s torment in hell. If hell is considered the state of the soul as it exists apart from God, then its opposite is the value that the existence of hell threatens, namely, being in the presence of God (or love, for “God is love”) for eternity. To be an eternal outcast of love is hell.

A threat to one’s whole way of life, which the Trojan War represented to the ancient Greeks, indicates that a people--in this case, the ancient Greeks--valued their culture. Although war is horrible, it’s not usually a horror story’s antagonist, because the monsters of horror fiction are, as we see in another post, metaphorical in nature. They’re symbolic of something else. Instead of a war threatening one’s way of life, therefore, a horror story might posit an extraterrestrial race, as in The War of the Worlds or Alien, as the antagonist, but, make no mistake, these monsters aren’t going to be satisfied with killing only a handful of victims; they want nothing less than a whole nation or, perhaps, the entire planet. In Marvel Comics’ Fantastic Four, Galactus represents such a threat to humanity. Following the lead of his herald, the Silver Surfer, who locates inhabited planets, Galactus literally devours the energy that sustains the planets’ life forms, whether they are human or otherwise, going from planet to planet to appease his hunger. Since Galactus threatens humanity itself, as do, or could, the Martians or the extraterrestrial monsters of Alien, he represents the destruction of a whole way of life, or a civilization and its culture. This same monster--the threat to culture--appears in Beowulf, in the guise of Grendel,
Grendel’s mother, and the dragon.

Such monsters, in a more specific mask and costume, showed up in the horror films of the 1950’s. After World War II, which culminated in the nuclear destruction of both Hiroshima and Nagasaki, the world feared wholesale annihilation, a worldwide nuclear holocaust, and the monsters of horror represented such a threat in the guise of Godzilla, giant ants (Them!), and aliens with enormous destructive capabilities (Invaders from Mars).

The post-war decades (1960’s-present) of horror produced more personal monsters, products of the decade’s emphases on sex, drugs, and rock and roll--experiments with sexual freedom (or license), altered consciousness, and the pursuit of passion, adventure, and excitement for their own sake: deranged serial killers, cannibals, and paranormal or supernatural aberrations and entities who acted, as often as not, on the bases of vengeance, lust, or sadism, rather than on the basis of any rational purpose. Again, the monsters are the threats to the values that the writers, filmmakers, and audiences hold dear. It’s hard to exercise one’s sexual freedom when there’s a sadistic serial killer on the loose or to enjoy one’s emotions when doing so could attract an alien or a demon who feeds off human feelings or the energy associated with them.

What’s to come? Time alone, it seems, has the answer. Whatever the new monster’s shape, though, it will be the shadow of the values of the society of the day that spawns it.

Evil Is As Evil Does

copyright 2007 by By Gary L. Pullman

If God is loving, omnipotent, and omniscient, why does evil exist? That question expresses the philosophical (and theological) dilemma that’s known as “the problem of evil.” In horror fiction especially, it’s this problem that’s the basis of the antagonist, who- or whatever he, she, or it may be.

Various authors of horror fiction, past and present, have defined evil. Most of them have presented specific ideas as to what constitutes wickedness. Let’s consider some of their conclusions.

For Nathaniel Hawthorne, who wrote not only The Scarlet Letter, but also such classic horror stories as “Dr. Heidegger’s Experiment,” “The Birthmark,” “The Great Stone Face,” and “Young Goodman Brown,” evil, boiled down to its essence, is a result of sin, in the traditional sense of the term’s meaning: pride, vanity, hypocrisy, and so on.

Edgar Allan Poe, author of Tales of the Grotesque and Arabesque, found passion, usually combined with various mental disorders, the source of various evils, most of which culminated in murder. The protagonist of “The Cask of the Amontillado” walls up a man simply because the main character envies his rival’s knowledge and success about wines and other matters.

H. G. Wells wrote horror stories as well as science fiction classics. One of these stories, “The Flowering of the Strange Orchid,” appears on this blog. For Wells, horror derives from and takes the form of human beings’ abuse of technology, which usually results either from ignorance or arrogance or both.

The Stephen Crane of the horror genre, H. P. Lovecraft found the universe to be indifferent to human existence. His fiction is replete with otherworldly beings and strange creatures from other dimensions who are representative of a cosmic indifference to humanity, having no regard for or understanding of the humans whom they often slaughter as if they were mere cattle. Viewed objectively and impersonally, from a cosmic perspective, life, for humans, Lovecraft’s fiction suggests, is “a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.” Evil doesn’t exist as such; it is rather, a matter of perception: people may regard meaninglessness, as represented by his fiction’s monsters, as evil, but, in itself, it’s just the nature of the universe in which such insignificant creatures happen to exist. His mosnters may be taken, therefore, as embodiments of the idea of nature as it appears apart from the control of an omnipotent, omniscient, and benevolent deity such as the God posited by Christian belief.

Dean Koontz values, above all things (except, perhaps, dogs), brotherly love. In his fiction, it is the ties to one’s community, to one’s nation, and to one’s species that counts. Even against great adversity and loss, brotherly love, he implies, gives human existence dignity and significance. It seems, therefore, that, for Koontz, evil is whatever threatens or denies the maintenance and development of such love, especially an insensitive indifference to humanity as such. Koontz, despite, or in addition to, his Catholic faith, is also, in this sense, a humanist.

Whatever threatens one’s hometown (an extension of one’s home) is evil, according to Stephen King’s many works of fiction. In this sense, King’s take on wickedness is similar to Koontz’s view of evil. However, King is more provincial, most of the time, finding those nearest at hand (and, presumably, dearest) to be more valuable than strangers who happen to reside in the same state or country or upon the same planet. It is one’s family and friends, not necessarily humanity in its entirety, that seems to matter to King; therefore, whatever threatens one’s family or local community is the bogeyman. Such a theme is conveyed in the bulk of King’s many novels, from Carrie onward.

For Bentley Little, evil is the indifference of nameless, faceless bureaucracies and other impersonal organizations.

Such an alaysis helps us to see the reigning demonic spirit of the age as various literary artists, living and working at various times in the history of the human race, have envisioned it. In his poem, “The Second Coming,” William Butler Yates asks, now that Christianity has come to a close, “What rough beast, its hour come round at last, slouches. . . toward Bethlehem to be born.” According to modern horror writers, the beast “with a gaze as blank and pitiless as the sun” is indifference, or apathy, at the local, organizational, or administrative, and the universal levels of human existence. However, the beast is nothing if not protean and has appeared in many previous incarnations, as indicated. Most likely, in future generations, it will assume still different forms.

Friday, December 28, 2007

Plotting Horror Fiction: The Invasion Plot

copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman

Note: Refer to "Basic Plots" for other horror plot patterns that are common to this fiction genre.
This method of plotting works best for the Invasion plot. Other methods work better for other types of horror plots. We may outline these other techniques in future posts.

In plotting, first develop the back story. In horror fiction, this is the true cause of the bizarre incidents that transpire in the story proper. For example, in Dean Koontz’s novel, The Taking, what seems to be reverse-terraforming on the part of invading aliens turns out to be a visit by Satan. The devil’s call is the true cause of the bizarre incidents that occur in the story. In Koontz’s novel. The Good Guy, hints are distributed throughout the story proper concerning the reason that the protagonist is adept with firearms and strategizing. The back story, which is told toward the end of the novel explains why: he is a war hero and Congressional Medal of Honor recipient who was instrumental in rescuing hundreds of hostages from their murderous captors. By delaying the explanation until most of the story proper has been told, Koontz maintains suspense. However, the back story, once it is told, provides a believable explanation as to why the main character is adept with firearms and developing battle plans.

After plotting the back story, start with an everyday situation. Introduce the main character and important supporting characters. Set up the conflict. Establish the setting. Characterize the characters. Let the reader get to know and understand the characters. Let the reader like the ones you want him or her to like and dislike those whom you want him or her to dislike.
Dramatize the first of the bizarre incidents. Show it happening. Show it affecting the characters--victims and friends alike. Relate it to the main character’s basic emotions and goals. Perhaps tie it to the protagonist’s past or to the past of the locale--the story’s setting. It may be advantageous to do both. Stephen King does this by making the monster in It appear periodically, attacking a new generation of children in the same town every thirty or forty years. He also has the children who face the monster as preteens return to their hometown, when the monster next returns, to face it again, as adults.

Allow other bizarre incidents to occur. Usually, it’s best to let the incidents befall several characters, rather than the same character (although either course is possible), as doing so keeps the reader wondering why the monster is attacking various characters and looking for the common thread that ties the attacks together. Remember that whatever causes or motivates the monster (whether it’s an impersonal force or an intelligent being) must be accounted for--in a believable fashion--in the back story.

If your story has a subplot (or two), weave it into the main plot. Often, horror stories have a romance between the main character and another character. Perhaps the main character is the new kid in town, rejected by everyone until he saves the most popular girl in school. Then, he wins her over (but no one else), and they become friends, with her losing her other friends as a result. Possibly, a woman comes to town seeking peace after an especially traumatic experience and, instead, encounters one even more terrifying and dangerous--the monster at the center of your story. Your protagonist will save the day--and her. Maybe there is not romance. Maybe, instead, your main character lacks something--self-esteem, self-confidence, self-respect, or whatever--and his fight against the monster allows him (or her) to gain what he (or she) originally lacked, as Beowulf does. In the poem named for him, Beowulf is considered a weakling who is, as such, unworthy of respect. When, in destroying Grendel and his mother, the warrior shows he’s as strong as he is courageous, he gains the esteem of his people; later, he becomes their king. Of course, a story can have a romantic subplot as well as a plot that involves recognition, or self-discovery. However, you don’t want to have too many subplots, because your story is liable to lose its unity and focus.

The main character leads the fight against the monster, protecting his friends and townsfolk from them to the best of his ability. The main character and many others take the initiative at some point in the fight against the monster.

At some point, toward the end of the story, your main character must discover the cause of the bizarre incidents. Armed with this knowledge, the main character sets up a battle plan by which to overcome the monster. He or she takes the fight to the monster. This is a common plot convention. Characters in It, The Taking, Dan Simmons’ Summer of Night, Robert McCammon’s Stinger, and many other horror novels seize the initiative once they determine how to slay the monster. Nevertheless, the monster proves hard to kill, and it may have a trick or two to use against the protagonist and his or her loyal (or, as in Beowulf, not-so-loyal) band.

Ultimately, the main character is often triumphant (but he or she need not be). If so, the story frequently ends with an epilogue that suggests that the monster may return or that it may be reincarnated in some new form--in case the writer wants to write a sequel to the original story.

Sunday, December 23, 2007

Dream Monsters

copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman

People may disagree as to whether the idea of dream analysis or interpretation has any real value or significance, as such psychologists as Sigmund Freud, Carl Jung, Alfred Adler, Frederick Perls, and others contend they do, but, even if one determines that the idea is without foundation, he or she may benefit from the work that dream analysts or interpreters have done with regard to defining the symbolic significance of specific dream images, for the associations these researchers have compiled have longstanding parallels in literature and language that doesn’t depend upon psychological theory.
  • Alien (extraterrestrial) - unknown parts of the personality
  • Angel - moral qualities and values
  • Blackbird - bad omen; lack of ambition or motivation
  • Blood - life, passion, disappointments
  • Cannibal - energy drain upon others
  • Castle - recognition; self-esteem
  • Cave - unconscious mind
  • Caveman - uncivilized, instinctive aspects of the self
  • Cemetery - end of a habit or behavior; sadness concerning the death of a loved one
  • Corpse - discontinued or repressed aspect of the self; unresponsiveness
  • Demon - socially undesirable or unacceptable aspects of the self; negative behaviors
  • Devil - temptation to do or to continue doing socially undesirable or unacceptable actions
  • Dragon - unbridled passion; wild behavior
  • Exorcism - attempt or desire to regain control
  • Fog - confusion; worry
  • Ghost - aspects of the self of which one is afraid; memories; past deeds; alienation
  • Giant - overwhelming obstacle or adversary
  • God - perfection; higher self
  • Goddess - feminine side (females); fear of women (men)
  • Gorilla - extreme or wild behavior
  • Grave - unconscious mind; death; feelings about death; uneasiness
  • Graveyard - discarded aspects of the self
  • Halloween - death
  • Haunted house - unresolved childhood trauma
  • Idol - false values
  • Island - relaxation, comfort, leisure; boring routine; isolation and aloofness
  • Lightning - revelation; awakening[ insight; purification; shock
  • Mausoleum - illness, death
  • Monster - grief, misfortune
  • Ogre - self-criticism
  • Poltergeist - lack of control
  • Rabies - anger, hostility, lack of control
  • Rat - doubt, worry, fear
  • Rot - wasted opportunity, potential
  • Satan - evil, wrongdoing
  • Serpent - intelligence, deception, temptation, sexual freedom
  • Skeleton - undeveloped potential or opportunity
  • Skin - ego defenses; superficiality
  • Skull - danger, death, evil
  • Spirit - death
  • Storm - overwhelming experience or emotion
  • Thunder - rage
  • Tomb - hidden aspects of the self
  • Torture - feelings of victimization or need for punishment
  • Vampire - sensuality, sexuality, death, drug addiction, dependency
  • Werewolf - posturing, insincerity, hypocrisy
  • Witch - destructive power of women
  • Zombie - emotional detachment

Saturday, December 22, 2007

The God of Desperation

Copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman



And fear not them which kill the body, but are not able to kill the soul: but rather fear him which is able to destroy both the soul and body in hell. -- Matthew 10:28

Some say that the most frightening character in Stephen King’s Desperation is not the demon Tak or any of his human hosts but God.

The God of Desperation is not the Sunday school God, and he’s inscrutable and alien, unknowable and mysterious. He’s also omniscient and omnipotent. Everyone, it seems, underestimates him, including his servant, the pre-teen David, whom, because God’s power is evident in the boy, Tak fears and loathes.
When one of the characters is hesitant to follow the plan God, through David, lays out, saying that doing so could cost all of them their lives, David replies that God doesn’t care whether any of them lives or dies; all he wants is to stop Tak, and he’s prepared to do whatever he must to accomplish his purpose.

By the end of the story, most of the townspeople are dead, as are David’s family--both parents and his younger sister--and David concludes, “God is cruel.” The reader has seen that Tak rejoices in cruelty as well as death and destruction. What might have happened had the demon escaped from the Nevada desert town? Stopping him, even at so great a cost as the lives of those who resisted the demon, might have been worth it.

Years before, having been released early from school, David had nailed his pass to a tree outside his tree house, hundreds of miles from Desperation. At the end of the story, another character finds the same pass in his pocket and gives it to David. On the pass the words “God is love” appear. Which God seems, cruel or loving, is a matter of perspective, it seems, and perspective, in this world, is always finite.

Tak learns that, far from there being no God in Desperation, as he’d supposed, it was God who, from the beginning, had ordered all the events that transpired since--and maybe even before--the demon escaped from his imprisonment in the collapsed copper mine outside the town. Tak was defeated before he began his campaign of terror. For the demon, God seems to rule by virtue of his might. The God of Desperation is like the elephant in the parable of the blind men. Whatever part of the animal one happens to touch suggests the nature of the animal, but it is none of the things the men imagine it to be; it is more, and other.

By bringing God to Desperation to battle a demon never heard of before, rather than a familiar spirit such as Satan, King renews the mystery and the majesty of God. The God of Desperation is, again, transcendent and unknowable--mighty, cruel, loving, all of these things and much, much more. In Desperation, it is a terrible thing, once again, to fall into the hands of the living God.

Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Why Monsters? Why Metaphors?

copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman


Note: The answers to the "Creepy Crawlies Quiz" are posted at the end of this article.


If you’ve had a chance to read my other posts, you’ve seen that horror writers (perhaps more than writers in other genres of fiction) tend to use metaphors to represent existential and spiritual themes. Often, these metaphors take the forms of the monsters that function as the narratives’ antagonists. The questions naturally arise, Why monsters? Why metaphors?

There are likely to be many answers to these questions. In this installment, I’ll address the two that occur to me at the moment.

First, they have presence.

What do I mean by “presence”? Walker Percy illustrates the idea well in his novel The Moviegoer. His protagonist, Binx Bolling, a soldier at this time in the story, has been injured in a battle. As he lies upon the battlefield, he catches sight of a dung beetle. Normally, he probably wouldn’t have seen the insect and, if he had, he wouldn’t have been likely to devote careful study to it. However, he is not operating under normal circumstances, and he is astonished to see the beetle, in all its glorious detail. It has presence for him; it has become visible. In doing so, it has shed the malaise of everydayness and become real.

Here’s the way that Percy describes the scene:



. . . I remembered the first time the search occurred to me. I came to myself under a chindolea bush. . . . Six inches from my nose a dung beetle was scratching around under the leaves. As I watched there awoke within me an immense curiosity. I was onto something.

Later, a similar experience happens to Binx:



. . . This morning, as I got up, I dressed as usual and began as usual to put my belongings into my pockets: wallet, notebook. . . pencil, keys, handkerchief, slide rule. . . . They looked both unfamiliar and at the same time full of clues. . . . What was unfamiliar about them was that I could see them. They might have belonged to someone else. A man can look at this little pile on his bureau for thirty years and never once see it. It is as invisible as his own hand. Once I saw it, however, the search became possible. . . .

We can all remember the times, usually as a child, during which we could lose ourselves in the contemplation of everyday objects such as a daisy or a drop of dew. We could see each grain of pollen, every glistening color of the rainbow that seemed to emanate from within the clear drop of early morning dew as it shimmered upon a green leaf. All the world was present in a grain of sand.

Then, as we grew older, things changed--or we changed. Saddled with responsibilities and governed by social expectations and conventions, our priorities changed. Eventually, we changed. We no longer had time to appreciate, admire, and embrace the world around us. We became alienated from our environment and estranged from or surroundings. We took for granted the wonders and enchantments of nature. More and more, the world began to disappear as we took birds and brooks, sun and moon, mountains and beaches, and pine trees and breezes for granted. The malaise of everydayness spread until we were nearly blind and deaf to the world around us. Things and people alike began to lack presence.

Occasionally, something happens, and we see again. We hear again. The world becomes present to us again, as the dung beetle became present for Binx. We recover the world or, perhaps, only a tiny portion of the world--maybe nothing more than a dung beetle. But it’s a start. If we can see an insect today, maybe someday we can see a forest or, looking into a looking-glass, even ourselves.

Monsters make us sit up and take notice. They grab our attention. They have immediate and intense presence, even in a world devoid of detail and force. Like a snake, a monster’s hard to miss. Emily Dickinson suggests this quality when she describes a hiker crossing a serpent’s path:



A narrow fellow in the grass
Occasionally rides;
You may have met him,--did you not?
His notice sudden is.

The grass divides as with a comb,
A spotted shaft is seen;
And then it closes at your feet
And opens further on.

He likes a boggy acre,
A floor too cool for corn.
Yet when a child, and barefoot,
I more than once, at morn,
Have passed, I thought, a whip-lash
Unbraiding in the sun,--
When, stooping to secure it,
It wrinkled, and was gone.

Several of nature's people
I know, and they know me;
I feel for them a transport
Of cordiality;
But never met this fellow,
Attended or alone,
Without a tighter breathing,
And zero at the bone.

The monster, likewise, is noticeable, immediately. That’s one reason that horror writers employ the monstrous. Monsters have presence. They’re bold font, italics, exclamation points, underlining.

Flannery O’Connor, asked why her fiction contains so many grotesque characters--physically, emotionally, or spiritually deformed characters (monsters, of a sort, really)--implied that she wrote for a “hostile audience“ and explained that, “to the hard of hearing you shout, and for the almost blind you draw large, startling figures.”

Often, monsters are the horror writer’s way of getting their readers’ attention.

That’s one reason horror writers employ monsters in their fiction. Another reason is that, by doing so, such writers also help their readers to face truths that are even more hideous than the monsters that represent these truths.

It's bad enough to come face to face with a ghost, a vampire, or a zombie, but it’s worse yet to encounter Ted Bundy, a child with cancer, the loss of a limb (or a mind), or sudden blindness. Lots of things are worse than demons and trolls and werewolves--Alzheimer’s, insanity, spinal bifida--but, as a rule, people don’t want to think of themselves or their loved ones succumbing to such real-life bogeymen. Therefore, horror writers use stand-ins--goblins in place of serial killers, witches in lieu of drug addiction, alien parasites instead of heart disease, autism, or intellectual and developmental disabilities. By facing these understudies, readers learn how to face the actual situations, circumstances, and incidents that these monsters symbolize.

In the process, we come to understand that we can survive losses more terrible than we want to imagine--or to face.

Note: These are the answers to the "Creepy Crawlies Quiz":

1. B; 2. B; 23. D; 4. B; 5. C; 6. A; 7. B, 8. C; 9. A; 10. C.

Understanding Monsters

copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman

Today, when we think of monsters, we envision something like Frankenstein’s creature, a troll, or a misshapen blob. That’s not what the word originally meant--or not quite what it meant. “Monster” initially referred to an animal or other creature (humans, for example) that were malformed, often because of a birth defect. The word “monster” meant, literally, “omen, portent, or sign,” according to the Online Etymology Dictionary, and monsters were regarded as “signs or omens of impending evil.” The sense of “abnormal or prodigious animals composed of parts of creatures,” a la many of the creatures of ancient Egyptian, Greek, and other mythologies, originated about 1385, the dictionary asserts, adding that the “sense of ‘person of inhuman cruelty or wickedness’ is from 1556.” By 1556, “monster” had come to also signify a “person of inhuman cruelty or wickedness.”

What was monstrous about monsters? The etymology of the word “monstrous,” the adjective derived from the noun “monster,” gives us a clue or two: “Monstrous,” according to the dictionary meant “unnatural, deviating from the natural order, hideous,” picking up the additional senses of meaning of “enormous” and “outrageously wrong” only later. The existence of monsters was once a subject of study known as teratology (from “teratos,” meaning “marvel” or “monster,” and “-ology,” meaning “study of”).

The etymologies of many of the words for monsters disclose the fears upon which many of them rested. Often, monsters were associated not only with death as such, but also with the horrible way in which one died at the hands--or rather, at the teeth and claws--of various monsters. Often, the unnatural creatures ate people alive, perhaps regarding them much as Buffy the Vampire Slayer’s vampire, Spike, thought of people--as “Happy Meals with legs.” However, a victim might be strangled (and then eaten, dead). For example, the Online Etymology Dictionary relates the following information concerning:
  • Manticore = man-eater
  • Ogre = man-eating giant
  • Orc = devouring monster
  • Sphinx = strangler.

A monster such as the water-dwelling afranc, with appetites for cattle rather than humans, was also feared, because, in eating the cattle, it deprived people of beef (although, it might be supposed, from the cattle’s point of view, the humans who consume them might also have been monsters). After all, what frightens us, as we observe in “Chillers and Thrillers: The Fiction of

Fear,” is really threats to the people and things we hold dear.

Some monsters suggest that we fear meaninglessness, too (a threat to our need to believe that our existence is important and purposeful). Some unnatural creatures imply that life, including human existence, might be absurd. One such monster is the moon-calf, whose name meant “abortive, shapeless, fleshly mass.” (One thinks of a tumor or an aborted fetus, perhaps.)

What’s most interesting to me is that the word “monster” is contrasted with the concept of normalcy, because a monster, originally, was a creature that was considered, in some way, unnatural. The ancients, of course, believed in natural laws. In physics, these were the laws of nature that controlled cosmic events. For society, similar laws of human nature controlled--or, at least, determined--what was right and proper conduct. These laws were inborn; they were the essential qualities with which one was born and which governed--or should govern--his or her behavior. To act against these natural laws was to act against nature, or to act unnaturally--to behave as a monster and, therefore, to become a monster.

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Tuesday, December 18, 2007

Fill-in-the-Blanks (Don't panic! It's not a quiz!)

copyright 2007 by Gary L. Pullman

There are many ways to generate a plot idea and to develop it so that the action that flows from the idea follows the format of the traditional story.

A traditional story depicts its main character as wanting to attain a goal for a definite, specific reason. The main character is then pitted against an adversary, the story’s antagonist, who wants to attain the same goal or a conflicting one for a reason of his or her own.

As a result, the main character encounters a series of increasingly more difficult obstacles. At first, all goes either poorly or well. (If the story is a comedy, things go poorly at first; if it’s to be a tragedy, things go well at first.) At the story’s turning point, the main character’s fortune changes for the better or the worse. If things were going poorly to begin with, they improve. If things were going well at the beginning of the story, they begin to deteriorate.

At the end of the story, for a reason that fits the set of circumstances involved, the main character either attains his or her goal or does not do so (or realizes that the goal was not as important as he or she had once supposed). As a result of the experience that the main character has undergone, he or she learns a lesson. The lesson is the theme of the story.

One way to make sure you develop your story along these lines is to use the fill-in-the blank approach. Here’s a template that you can use:


The main character, _________________ _________________, wants to
_________________ because _________________ , but he or she must struggle against _________________ _________________, who wants _________________ because _________________. This story takes place in _________________ (location) in _________________ (time period). To attain his or her goal, _________________ _________________ (the main character) must overcome the following, increasingly more difficult obstacles: _________________, _________________, and _________________ (add more if desired). For the main character, for whom everything goes _________________ (well or poorly) at the beginning of the story, the turning point (climax) occurs when he or she _________________, and then the opposite state of affairs ensues, as things begin to _________________(worsen or improve). At the end of the story, _________________ _________________ (the main character) _________________ (attains or does not attain) his or her goal, because _________________ (reason), learning that _________________ (lesson learned from the experience; the story’s theme) and, as a result, changes by _________________ (how the main character changes).


Now, let’s see how the template would look if it had been used to outline The Wizard of Oz (film version) in which we've added bold font to highlight the key information:

The main character, Dorothy Gale, wants to return to her home in Kansas because she is homesick, but she must struggle against the Wicked Witch of the West, who wants Dorothy‘s ruby slippers because they are magic. This story takes place in Oz (location) in the present day (time period). To attain her goal, Dorothy Gale (the main character) must overcome the following, increasingly more difficult obstacles: escape the fighting trees, survive the deadly poppy field, and seize the Wicked Witch‘s broomstick (add more if desired). For the main character, for whom everything goes poorly (well or poorly) at the beginning of the story, the turning point (climax) occurs when he or she is sent by the Wizard to seize the Wicked Witch‘s broomstick, and then the opposite state of affairs ensues, as things begin to improve (worsen or improve). At the end of the story, Dorothy Gale (the main character) attains (attains or does not attain) his or her goal, because Glinda, the Good Witch, tells Dorothy how to use the ruby slippers to take her home (reason), learning that there‘s no place like home (lesson learned from the experience; the story’s theme) and, as a result, changes by being content with her life on the Kansas farm (how the main character changes).

In future installments, we’ll consider other effective ways to generate plot ideas and develop the story’s action.

Paranormal vs. Supernatural: What’s the Diff?

Copyright 2009 by Gary L. Pullman

Sometimes, in demonstrating how to brainstorm about an essay topic, selecting horror movies, I ask students to name the titles of as many such movies as spring to mind (seldom a difficult feat for them, as the genre remains quite popular among young adults). Then, I ask them to identify the monster, or threat--the antagonist, to use the proper terminology--that appears in each of the films they have named. Again, this is usually a quick and easy task. Finally, I ask them to group the films’ adversaries into one of three possible categories: natural, paranormal, or supernatural. This is where the fun begins.

It’s a simple enough matter, usually, to identify the threats which fall under the “natural” label, especially after I supply my students with the scientific definition of “nature”: everything that exists as either matter or energy (which are, of course, the same thing, in different forms--in other words, the universe itself. The supernatural is anything which falls outside, or is beyond, the universe: God, angels, demons, and the like, if they exist. Mad scientists, mutant cannibals (and just plain cannibals), serial killers, and such are examples of natural threats. So far, so simple.

What about borderline creatures, though? Are vampires, werewolves, and zombies, for example, natural or supernatural? And what about Freddy Krueger? In fact, what does the word “paranormal” mean, anyway? If the universe is nature and anything outside or beyond the universe is supernatural, where does the paranormal fit into the scheme of things?

According to the Online Etymology Dictionary, the word “paranormal,” formed of the prefix “para,” meaning alongside, and “normal,” meaning “conforming to common standards, usual,” was coined in 1920. The American Heritage Dictionary defines “paranormal” to mean “beyond the range of normal experience or scientific explanation.” In other words, the paranormal is not supernatural--it is not outside or beyond the universe; it is natural, but, at the present, at least, inexplicable, which is to say that science cannot yet explain its nature. The same dictionary offers, as examples of paranormal phenomena, telepathy and “a medium’s paranormal powers.”

Wikipedia offers a few other examples of such phenomena or of paranormal sciences, including the percentages of the American population which, according to a Gallup poll, believes in each phenomenon, shown here in parentheses: psychic or spiritual healing (54), extrasensory perception (ESP) (50), ghosts (42), demons (41), extraterrestrials (33), clairvoyance and prophecy (32), communication with the dead (28), astrology (28), witchcraft (26), reincarnation (25), and channeling (15); 36 percent believe in telepathy.

As can be seen from this list, which includes demons, ghosts, and witches along with psychics and extraterrestrials, there is a confusion as to which phenomena and which individuals belong to the paranormal and which belong to the supernatural categories. This confusion, I believe, results from the scientism of our age, which makes it fashionable for people who fancy themselves intelligent and educated to dismiss whatever cannot be explained scientifically or, if such phenomena cannot be entirely rejected, to classify them as as-yet inexplicable natural phenomena. That way, the existence of a supernatural realm need not be admitted or even entertained. Scientists tend to be materialists, believing that the real consists only of the twofold unity of matter and energy, not dualists who believe that there is both the material (matter and energy) and the spiritual, or supernatural. If so, everything that was once regarded as having been supernatural will be regarded (if it cannot be dismissed) as paranormal and, maybe, if and when it is explained by science, as natural. Indeed, Sigmund Freud sought to explain even God as but a natural--and in Freud’s opinion, an obsolete--phenomenon.

Meanwhile, among skeptics, there is an ongoing campaign to eliminate the paranormal by explaining them as products of ignorance, misunderstanding, or deceit. Ridicule is also a tactic that skeptics sometimes employ in this campaign. For example, The Skeptics’ Dictionary contends that the perception of some “events” as being of a paranormal nature may be attributed to “ignorance or magical thinking.” The dictionary is equally suspicious of each individual phenomenon or “paranormal science” as well. Concerning psychics’ alleged ability to discern future events, for example, The Skeptic’s Dictionary quotes Jay Leno (“How come you never see a headline like 'Psychic Wins Lottery'?”), following with a number of similar observations:

Psychics don't rely on psychics to warn them of impending disasters. Psychics don't predict their own deaths or diseases. They go to the dentist like the rest of us. They're as surprised and disturbed as the rest of us when they have to call a plumber or an electrician to fix some defect at home. Their planes are delayed without their being able to anticipate the delays. If they want to know something about Abraham Lincoln, they go to the library; they don't try to talk to Abe's spirit. In short, psychics live by the known laws of nature except when they are playing the psychic game with people.
In An Encyclopedia of Claims, Frauds, and Hoaxes of the Occult and Supernatural, James Randi, a magician who exercises a skeptical attitude toward all things alleged to be paranormal or supernatural, takes issue with the notion of such phenomena as well, often employing the same arguments and rhetorical strategies as The Skeptic’s Dictionary.

In short, the difference between the paranormal and the supernatural lies in whether one is a materialist, believing in only the existence of matter and energy, or a dualist, believing in the existence of both matter and energy and spirit. If one maintains a belief in the reality of the spiritual, he or she will classify such entities as angels, demons, ghosts, gods, vampires, and other threats of a spiritual nature as supernatural, rather than paranormal, phenomena. He or she may also include witches (because, although they are human, they are empowered by the devil, who is himself a supernatural entity) and other natural threats that are energized, so to speak, by a power that transcends nature and is, as such, outside or beyond the universe. Otherwise, one is likely to reject the supernatural as a category altogether, identifying every inexplicable phenomenon as paranormal, whether it is dark matter or a teenage werewolf. Indeed, some scientists dedicate at least part of their time to debunking allegedly paranormal phenomena, explaining what natural conditions or processes may explain them, as the author of The Serpent and the Rainbow explains the creation of zombies by voodoo priests.

Based upon my recent reading of Tzvetan Todorov's The Fantastic: A Structural Approach to the Fantastic, I add the following addendum to this essay.

According to Todorov:

The fantastic. . . lasts only as long as a certain hesitation [in deciding] whether or not what they [the reader and the protagonist] perceive derives from "reality" as it exists in the common opinion. . . . If he [the reader] decides that the laws of reality remain intact and permit an explanation of the phenomena described, we can say that the work belongs to the another genre [than the fantastic]: the uncanny. If, on the contrary, he decides that new laws of nature must be entertained to account for the phenomena, we enter the genre of the marvelous (The Fantastic: A Structural Approach to a Literary Genre, 41).
Todorov further differentiates these two categories by characterizing the uncanny as “the supernatural explained” and the marvelous as “the supernatural accepted” (41-42).

Interestingly, the prejudice against even the possibility of the supernatural’s existence which is implicit in the designation of natural versus paranormal phenomena, which excludes any consideration of the supernatural, suggests that there are no marvelous phenomena; instead, there can be only the uncanny. Consequently, for those who subscribe to this view, the fantastic itself no longer exists in this scheme, for the fantastic depends, as Todorov points out, upon the tension of indecision concerning to which category an incident belongs, the natural or the supernatural. The paranormal is understood, by those who posit it, in lieu of the supernatural, as the natural as yet unexplained.

And now, back to a fate worse than death: grading students’ papers.

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My Cup of Blood

Anyone who becomes an aficionado of anything tends, eventually, to develop criteria for elements or features of the person, place, or thing of whom or which he or she has become enamored. Horror fiction--admittedly not everyone’s cuppa blood--is no different (okay, maybe it’s a little different): it, too, appeals to different fans, each for reasons of his or her own. Of course, in general, book reviews, the flyleaves of novels, and movie trailers suggest what many, maybe even most, readers of a particular type of fiction enjoy, but, right here, right now, I’m talking more specifically--one might say, even more eccentrically. In other words, I’m talking what I happen to like, without assuming (assuming makes an “ass” of “u” and “me”) that you also like the same. It’s entirely possible that you will; on the other hand, it’s entirely likely that you won’t.

Anyway, this is what I happen to like in horror fiction:

Small-town settings in which I get to know the townspeople, both the good, the bad, and the ugly. For this reason alone, I’m a sucker for most of Stephen King’s novels. Most of them, from 'Salem's Lot to Under the Dome, are set in small towns that are peopled by the good, the bad, and the ugly. Part of the appeal here, granted, is the sense of community that such settings entail.

Isolated settings, such as caves, desert wastelands, islands, mountaintops, space, swamps, where characters are cut off from civilization and culture and must survive and thrive or die on their own, without assistance, by their wits and other personal resources. Many are the examples of such novels and screenplays, but Alien, The Shining, The Descent, Desperation, and The Island of Dr. Moreau, are some of the ones that come readily to mind.

Total institutions as settings. Camps, hospitals, military installations, nursing homes, prisons, resorts, spaceships, and other worlds unto themselves are examples of such settings, and Sleepaway Camp, Coma, The Green Mile, and Aliens are some of the novels or films that take place in such settings.

Anecdotal scenes--in other words, short scenes that showcase a character--usually, an unusual, even eccentric, character. Both Dean Koontz and the dynamic duo, Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child, excel at this, so I keep reading their series (although Koontz’s canine companions frequently--indeed, almost always--annoy, as does his relentless optimism).

Atmosphere, mood, and tone. Here, King is king, but so is Bentley Little. In the use of description to terrorize and horrify, both are masters of the craft.

A bit of erotica (okay, okay, sex--are you satisfied?), often of the unusual variety. Sex sells, and, yes, sex whets my reader’s appetite. Bentley Little is the go-to guy for this spicy ingredient, although Koontz has done a bit of seasoning with this spice, too, in such novels as Lightning and Demon Seed (and, some say, Hung).

Believable characters. Stephen King, Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child, and Dan Simmons are great at creating characters that stick to readers’ ribs.

Innovation. Bram Stoker demonstrates it, especially in his short story “Dracula’s Guest,” as does H. P. Lovecraft, Edgar Allan Poe, Shirley Jackson, and a host of other, mostly classical, horror novelists and short story writers. For an example, check out my post on Stoker’s story, which is a real stoker, to be sure. Stephen King shows innovation, too, in ‘Salem’s Lot, The Shining, It, and other novels. One might even argue that Dean Koontz’s something-for-everyone, cross-genre writing is innovative; he seems to have been one of the first, if not the first, to pen such tales.

Technique. Check out Frank Peretti’s use of maps and his allusions to the senses in Monster; my post on this very topic is worth a look, if I do say so myself, which, of course, I do. Opening chapters that accomplish a multitude of narrative purposes (not usually all at once, but successively) are attractive, too, and Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child are as good as anyone, and better than many, at this art.

A connective universe--a mythos, if you will, such as both H. P. Lovecraft and Stephen King, and, to a lesser extent, Dean Koontz, Bentley Little, and even Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child have created through the use of recurring settings, characters, themes, and other elements of fiction.

A lack of pretentiousness. Dean Koontz has it, as do Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child, Bentley Little, and (to some extent, although he has become condescending and self-indulgent of late, Stephen King); unfortunately, both Dan Simmons and Robert McCammon have become too self-important in their later works, Simmons almost to the point of becoming unreadable. Come on, people, you’re writing about monsters--you should be humble.

Longevity. Writers who have been around for a while usually get better, Stephen King, Dan Simmons, and Robert McCammon excepted.

Pacing. Neither too fast nor too slow. Dean Koontz is good, maybe the best, here, of contemporary horror writers.

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